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Serendipity (title suggestions wanted) (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

Victory is found not in triumph or surrender; It is obtained from conflicts that force ones mind and soul to blossom with roots entwined deep within the soil. Competition is only a means to such an end; the fool greets loss with despair-- A king accepts it with a gentle smile knowing he has become stronger with his weakness revealed to his own piercing eyes.

Jill Stockinger 2-Jan-21/5:56 PM
Maybe title it Growth?
add an apostrophe to one's in one's mind
loved line: blossom with roots/ entwined deep within the soil--lovely.
really like the last 3 lines.




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