poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Counting by Dovina.

nentwined22 Jun 2012

I think "grave" is out of place (even though I'm sure you intended that, I think it's the wrong out of place, at that point?)

It's a lot of fun, a good one, but I want to trim it, slightly, find it a cadence (or a different one).

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