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prove me wrong (Free verse) by nentwined

As you grow up, you will lose: your innocence to the world-- your dreams, one by one; your certainty. As you grow old, you will lose: your poise and your strength-- the last of your dreams, your dignity. The things that you'll keep 'til death do you part: your fears and your habits, and perfidy.

nentwined 6-Mar-09/4:42 AM
Thanks :D

One of these days, we will see, we will see. It's amazing this place has been here this long.

You probably have more certainty than you realize (he says, older and wiser *cough* sure....)

Innocence to the world gone a few months ago? Now that sounds like a tale. Or a poem. ;) Hopefully not a pimple :)




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