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the end of the world, c'est soir (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

wh whr war war am i where am i theres too much time theres too much time too much time where am i theres too much time too much time where am i where am i where ami too much time too much time much time much tine machine machine machine machine machine machine machine n .

nentwined 5-Mar-09/9:48 PM
hah, that's great. well, I mean, not Great, but I like what you did, sir, I do. I like what you did with that, and did not see it coming. Half-way through I was going to comment that I've written stuff far too similar to this (as part of a longer short-story), but I like what you did. :)




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