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no title (Haiku) by Dovina

shriek of a wounded bird wingless shards on hardwood floor he bumped another wineglass

nentwined 27-Feb-09/5:54 AM
:heh: I had some trouble with the transition from 1 to 2; and 3 felt somewhat cheap.




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