poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Suicide Note [Disposal Instructions Included] by SupremeDreamer.

INTRANSIT10 Sep 2008

I'd like to see the first line gone. The title covers it. But the Main part, I'd like to see really odd things there, not the drugs and the sex etc. Not that true grunge doesn't have a place, I'm just not one for "shock" value. Write another one my way please, and I'll compare, and, maybe concede. Whaddaya got ta lose?