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5 minute poem: section (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

pain trumpeting from boney sides god-damn socialists thieves thieves is what they are like the doctors that cleave they took a section and never gave it back but he still has the strength to organize and reorganize mow the lawn etc thinner yes, but tough as telephone poles like the ones he used to climb as he naps in his chair, I notice the crease between his eyebrows is still there

SupremeDreamer 5-Sep-08/6:10 PM
The emotional context associated with the line is not weightless to me. Expression sometimes can not live up to anothers' perspective.

Been awhile hasn't it old friend?

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