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If you want? (Lyric) by FreeFormFixation

Annie once dragged both her folks to her class. Her mother: a slacker, Her daddy: an ass. And the latter was a dame, all damn classy and sass. Her brother: a broker, Her daddy: an ass. And the former stood up tall, his bitch-nips a'cuttin glass. His mother: a teacher, His daddy: an ass. Then the students stood like vultures on a rotting carcass. First their mother, never sweeter. Then their daddy, taste like ass.

T. Jonathron Remp 29-Jul-08/8:34 PM
This is filled to the brim with avant-garde post-modern hypnotics. It reached me, deep. I love the imagery, seeping, creeping at me from all angles! Oh wait, I didn't even read it because the title is hot garbage.




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