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Moat Man
(
Free verse
) by
JMakStak
Pull the bridge up but let me inside. Don't ever let up just let me inside. I am not safe no, no I am not safe. So lock me up tight sweetheart, let me inside.
nentwined
26-Jun-08/8:39 PM
this has something, though I think you're going concrete as opposed to free verse? and I'm not really getting the concrete image except for a vague separation of things...
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