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Absurd Robot (Lyric) by Nepanthe

I am self actualizing, each of my steps are exacting, mine is a limited pace, in which I know my place. I am calculating, each of the problems I'm facing, straight lines from here to there, somehow I ended up where- I began. A flaw with this twisting, world ever changing, or is it with me, deep in my circuitry. I was walking, but I see I am dancing, to a cosmic beat, underneath my feet. I am dancing, to a cosmic pulsating, straight lines, I missed a link, I am incomplete. To end so close to understanding, troubling, frustrating, I have missed a vital link, I find myself incomplete. Incomplete, Incomplete, Incomplete, Obsolete.

Edna Sweetlove 25-Feb-08/6:30 PM
This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....




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