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Happy Birthday (Free verse) by jessicazee

I want to cut your hair every day, not because I want to change you, although a few feathers - a wisp of Irish Pub Gray, a carved bit of groom might sidle up nicely to my winter-chafed face. I give you my lips, chapped; a dry radiated goodnight on your numberless birthday eve. A razor for a gift.

INTRANSIT 23-Dec-07/11:00 AM
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