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The bakers wife (Free verse) by Caducus

Raked across his back God's representative and steel sent conquistadors of blood to a floor of spent confessions. Upon the pyre - a heretic, Seville chanted his name his scream had no accent a name lay charred to a post. As he fell skyward the inquistion walked downward where a bakers wife spat in their faces unyielding, they dragged her to a post where an orange gown dressed her for her baker, not once did she scream.

Paul S 18-Dec-07/5:43 AM
I have always been impressed by your metaphors and there are some good ones in this piece.




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