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Trapped in a horseshoe (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

She spins and pops your top serves you cold and deflects the bold with a smile. She's friendly on tap, just for a little while. She works without seam; buddy, confidant, quarterback of the linear team. She likes to mix it up and keep things alive,while hiding her stirring deep deep inside. She can send your troubles away, a cure for the blues. Washes them right down your throat, boilermaker smooth. Dignity intact she still gets undressed by her audience under every nighttime sun. Yet she is the captive one.

Dovina 27-Nov-07/8:58 PM
Scratch the "and" in Verse 1. I like "quarterback of the linear team." Space after the comma in Verse 3. Last line is provocative.




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