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INTELLIGENCIA (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Intelligence is the new ethnic cleansing the downer of four week old horses It is the Sumo, and the Mafioso and the clear cutter of forests. It is the bully making her rounds a critic at the opening and an unrestrained fire burning through cities to be it's own it's only desire. It is the microscope micrometer barometric pressure indicator pyrometer sandblast against the fender and the D.N.A. bender. It's the largest of silverback apes it's canines lodged in the back of the brain and a nuclear frost bearing down on the vineyard grapes.

INTRANSIT 11-Nov-07/8:06 AM
So I dropped the Ibex and some of the punctuation, cut some excess words so I hope it reads better, at least.

But what I need to persue is that opening line.




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