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Flat (Free verse) by Skamper

every hollow air filled dip on my crinkled cardboard form a never ending pattern tiny waves shallow and bland unrelieved by even the faintest sigh tastes of beige the fight - I picked with you didn’t have the same fire my heart refused to beat any faster and my mouth – well it lacked bite so I just drove too far with the tank on empty

Skamper 4-Nov-07/4:13 PM
I never thought of the references to burning/fire...hmmm, wonder what I meant with that...

The cardboard describes how I felt at the time, a cut-out of myself, there but not taking part.




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