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Winter Moon (Free verse) by Musicman

crisp clear night stills the winter moon bittersweet old memories loom time marks the shadows’ walk of barren trees and farmers’ stalks last lonely leaf tumbles to the lake serpentine swell marks the water’s wake a reflection of her presence quakes winter moon’s white shimmer

Musicman 4-Nov-07/1:38 AM
Hmm, that is an interesting look at this. I did not see starlit night as necessarily cliche, but is overused in other forms of writing (short stories and novels. I will work on this and see what comes up. Thank you for your time and the gift of feedback Sasha!




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