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Winter Moon (Free verse) by Musicman

crisp clear night stills the winter moon bittersweet old memories loom time marks the shadows’ walk of barren trees and farmers’ stalks last lonely leaf tumbles to the lake serpentine swell marks the water’s wake a reflection of her presence quakes winter moon’s white shimmer

Sasha 28-Oct-07/10:44 PM
Starlit night: Cliché

Nightly gloom: Redundant cliché

Find a less cliché word than "Ghostly"

Other than that, not bad




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