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Never Let Go (Free verse) by x0lovelylarnx0

The crystal clear water stands still beneath the serene sunset His blazing blue eyes stare deep into her lost soul Piercing through a blanket blocking out all human existence The wicked wind whips sand through their ceaseless love Never diverting his attention away from her fragile heart She fine combs through the coarse unending sand, fingers soothed, loosing all memory of the past He grasps her delicate hands, wishing she would never let go, would never push his constant adulation towards her away He's her foundation, standing firm and strong, wrapping her pain in his mighty arms A tear outpours down her bitter face like rain on a cold, dark, dreary night Releasing her all, letting the trials, tribulations, and misery break down into fleeting pieces, never to be seen again The veil falls down, fighting against the Devil's enticement, afflicted on her despairing spirit A promise is a promise, he never released her hand from his perpetual protection The sun rose the next morning, reflecting it's warmth and light, wiping away all the dread of what is to come tomorrow.

x0lovelylarnx0 18-Oct-07/11:19 AM
Too the people who gave me 0s, would you explain to me why you gave me 0s except for Rockmage because I honestly do not care what you think since you just go around giving everyone 0s!




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