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The rift (Free verse) by MacFrantic

The rift between her legs is rapid decline Her mind's a malnourished polecat Whiplash; convulsive, desperate eyes Realization is a cheap matinee Moans fall from her furious tongue Her body is an arching, rigid turnpike And all the while I'm across the world Hopping turnstile to turnstile Playing magic on myself While the trains come

Paul S 14-Sep-07/3:38 AM
"relization is a cheap matinee." I like--good write.




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