poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The rift by MacFrantic.

INTRANSIT12 Sep 2007

Starting at line 3:

Whiplashed, convulsive, her eyes are
a cheap matinee
moans fall from her carpet tongue
She arches; a rigid turnpike

Playing magic on myself ? try tying it back to the polecat or the movie theatre.

Still I likes.