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A.M. (Free verse) by renwick

How could I forget, Her or Her For the language of love is also the Language of torture Staring at a rose bush as it slowly dies Or a sparrow carrying a cigarette butt back To use in building a nest Pain lies in every passion Although I'd love to I cannot forget

royalflesh 16-Sep-02/11:46 AM
ok. there's much to be considered adhearing to such a disaster of language. You sir, wear a cloak and spin nervously through the day to find the other twin that beckens your lousy name. Ciao, good day. 3




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