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Dying Candle
(
Free verse
) by
cheese.doodles
The flameâs death Is violent It claws frantically At cold, smothering space As the wax, Its life-blood, Is stolen Away into the greedy air That is Suddenly Dark.
richa
31-Jul-07/2:18 PM
Wax isn't stolen by the air it is fed upon by the flame.
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