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guilt (Free verse) by eunique

a beautiful song that faded though i really wanted to familiarize myself with melody repeating over and over bridge to chorus yet never complete snapped my fingers trying to recall it is a shame i really would have searched under the covers, on top of shelves in every page of every book maybe i tucked you in there i never did look i substituted you for other songs that were more accessible though the phone is beside me and the bus ride is actually short it must be quite an experience to know you more to decipher you how you waited for me to find you how you were composed for me how you keep knocking at my door throwing stones at my window or could that be guilt but i never listened as if wanting you to do fade maybe without "as if"

SupremeDreamer 27-Jul-07/1:50 PM
Btw, a better title would be in order as well...




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