SupremeDreamer27 Jul 2007

maybe i tucked you in there
i never did look
i substituted you for other songs

--I think you should cut out the 'I's-:

might have tucked you in there..
never did look, substituted you
for other songs
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Just a suggestion. I'm just biased against the word I.. that and when it's used repeditivly it rings of anathema going super nova in my rectum.

Blessed with an eight.