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Deeper (Senryu) by Skamper

I do not fear love Nearly as much as I should Frighten me some more

lmp 2-Jul-07/9:02 AM
i agree. eschewing puctuation altogether leaves it open to the reader's interpretation.

i would agree with Ranger only if there was a period (or "full stop", "full point" or "dot", choose your favorite nomenclature) at the end of the last line.




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