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light [edited] (Haiku) by lmp

yellow-pink rind fades next to morning light's luster upon your soft skin

Ranger 1-Jul-07/3:16 AM
Unless you're sleeping with bacon, the rind wants explaining in the title. You give us the light in the poem, so the title's free to do a bit more work. Nice image, now that I know what it's about.




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