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God and Country (Haiku) by dougsoderstrom

Prayers to Jesus, Flags a waving, Missiles launched from pews.

dougsoderstrom 16-Sep-02/9:27 AM
Dear balthazar:
Well, I do beg to differ balthazar, but I do believe that given a broader description of a haiku, that this could be considered to be a haiku-----but since you said so, why is it that you consider my poem not to be a haiku? Please explain. I would have said something about "planes being launched from 'fucking' mosques," but that is just not my thing. As I am kind of into criticizing the hypocricies of my own faith-----That is what I seem to be best at doing.

Doug




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