Ranger22 Jun 2007
A lot of good lines - 'love is most commonly found written on a paper', 'piss out the rust' and others. Not sure about 'corporate feeding tubes', it might work better if it were a little more detached from the social ills. Or that might just be my reading. Good poeme.
Btw, I never got that email, I think the microsoft network might not be all it's cracked up to be :-(