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husk [hai-crete] (Haiku) by lmp

brittle empty skin easily crushed and bro ken f l i e s upon cold wind

Dovina 21-Jun-07/3:04 PM
By that standard, crushed should be crshd, crushing out some letters. And empty, well, should be a blank space. Anyway, it's a fun thing.




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