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husk [hai-crete] (Haiku) by lmp

brittle empty skin easily crushed and bro ken f l i e s upon cold wind

Ranger 21-Jun-07/5:15 AM
Love the breaking of broken and the flying of the flies. And presumably you're aiming for the breakages, the incompleteness making something whole and concrete?




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