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turd cutter (Limerick) by Count Flatula

I once took a girl home that I found in a ditch and everything went off with out a hitch but in the morning when I seen her on her chest I dropped a Cleveland Steamer and yelled "Its time for breakfast, bitch"

sca 9-Jun-07/1:52 AM
you know, the content isn't why I'm giving this a 0, because I actually find feminism provoking bits and pieces amusing. I'm giving this a 0 because you could've done something better. the meter's out and the rhyme happens once. put some time into it.




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