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Love - In the Noughties (Free verse) by Skamper

who gave my mind a stick for now it’s poking holes in imaginations soul who whispered wearily into my bleeding heart that started up a game where fingers went insane tripped up my dreamy feet I fall - hard, upon my back fronting up to darkness - my eyes reveal the sharpness my tongue whipped into shape my hair it now reminds me of the strings I used to bind me and thought it was a laugh… my teeth are talking back No - Seriously it’s true I’m so fucking bored without you -

Skamper 4-Jun-07/5:24 PM
what can I say...was bored/lazy. In a strange way those tired ol' phrases kinda work...in the context of the write, yea? Or am I just reaching here?




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