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witch's bliss (Free verse) by crin

she hunts the night through star-filled skies tempting devils and killing little white lies she wears all the angels as good luck charms she stones the moon and gathers up the pieces in her arms inside the eclipse she conceals all her gifts all her most cherished possessions lie on her lips living dangerously and stealing bliss she holds all of heaven and gives it away in her kiss

renwick 15-Sep-02/10:18 PM
I like it although something about the first two lines in the last stanza don't sound right to me. I give it a 7.




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