poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on 1945 by nypoet22.

Ranger23 May 2007

I can't shake the Hiroshima feeling from this, "cold" being the odd word out, of course.

"Satchel" is an interesting word to use there, it's either incredibly effective or detracting; I'm not certain which. I'll come back to this later.