bwaha23 Apr 2007
Thanks for the spelling correction....eep! And mechanics is usually something I'm good at .....
I wasn't sure if it was too ....I dunno, over done or simplistic or what not as a regular free verse which is why I stuck it under lyric, but it was not originally written as such, so I actually like the fact that you called me out on this.
Thanks for the comments, when I go back for an edit, I'll keep 'em in mind...