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Cane (Free verse) by richa

Is it you, that cane-tap, you are blind, I get it, but it is morning and there is only you and I and the road so please stop. I would never poison me a pigeon or hang for any crime and yet however far I step from arsenic and want I still hear your cane-tap, you are blind. I am descended of Adam but you are old and no nearer to heaven.

drnick 29-Mar-07/3:23 PM
Hahahaha, heaven-that's funny. But seriously, I like what you've done here although I can't say I get anything from reading this. However that is probably because I am stupid. Yay.




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