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Her (Sonnet) by Sasha

A face in a Sedan, a billboard’s eye, The voice of a wrong number, a quick smile Snatched into hindsight from a passer-by And skin reflected in a kitchen tile Imply Her for a wink of time and pass Out of that field a thousand questions thresh. A monk saw shards of heaven in stained glass And Isis made love from a god’s ripped flesh. Now on some girl who was last night’s best beast I grope in clement light but grasp at Her While mourning shakes a rattle in the east And time prepares me, like a prisoner. Song of the crowd, of winter rose and sun, I will retain you from all unison.

richa 28-Mar-07/1:52 PM
Pass. If you're to write about a her or a he in which nothing happens you need to come up with something pretty spectacular to keep people interested. Purple prose doesn't cut it.




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