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Abused Light (Free verse) by Greeny

Celebrating with glow, A high rise to a slow, And a breath-taking expose, Colourful; tangerine to rose, Spontaneous explosions in the sky at night, Bringing joy by abusing light, Noise of thunder, Bringing fantasy and wonder, Beautiful souls escaping, Forming and shaping, Throwing sparks of marble balls, Up – bright – fades – falls, The beauty returns to Earth’s face, Dies to ash at a floating pace, Never seen again, Leaving with a fiery grain.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Mar-07/6:30 PM
By apostrophe you mean acute accent. By colon or dash you mean semicolon. And it's obvious why light is being abused. God did not intend such unnatural bursts of colour to stain the night sky. He made the night black, not electric blue, or luminous green. Only once has He ever allowed fireworks, and that was immediately after the Resurrection, where they were accompanied by a laser light show and foam party, all choreographed to Simply The Best by Tina Turner.




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