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Her Mitts (Free verse) by Nepanthe

My mitts are hermits, their land is each hand, knitted, well fitted, bold in the cold. A hand's haven between action, brings warmth and satisfaction. Comfortable within my skin, I'll remove my mittens for my kin. My hands may brave the Winter's groan, for the friend without mitts of her own.

Dovina 13-Mar-07/2:29 PM
I trusted him once in regard to a low-sounding syllable at the end of my line, which he said offended with its highness. I layed it down inverted, which he found quite agreeable.




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