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cold war (Free verse) by Dental Panic

gravity expressed itself in its most lyrical form and before the gutter could suck it all up they showed up in the hood: snowman makers carrying shovels & spades & portable phones & within half a day or so next to every pole there rose a blind white giant with a stonecold grin waiting for its picture to be taken – a perfect target for the snowball insurgents: a massacre! even though a few stood their ground for quite a while

half.italian 5-Mar-07/9:06 AM
I think you could stay with the analogy through the last line. Don't give it to us. I got it right away. Nice poem.




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