poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Around 4am at this time of the year by Nicholas Jones.

nentwined15 Feb 2007

Why are you afraid of not being able to sleep? That's the core, I think, to move the rest along. Maybe. Give us why we should be afraid, that we are afraid, and then pump the fear through our veins. And then show us the sunrise, numbly, in elegant (but not overwrought) detail... the haunting promise that our fears are realized.