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self-suffocation (Lyric) by Phalkon

stuck inside my own head no way to break free i scream 'til my lungs implode no one listens... i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip i turn myself inside out and look at myself in the sunlight the bright burns my eyes my eyes too dry to cry i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip i tendons tear apart i feel my beating heart i can see my muscles ache i feel about to break i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip (the whispering begins... (i know it's that time again... (the light begins to fade... (and everything's still the same...) i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip

SupremeDreamer 12-Feb-07/1:34 PM
I never said at any point that "You would never be as good a writer as I am.", you fucking dolt. I simply said that this recent post of yours, and most likely the previous ones, suck ass and lack any real effort and/or forethought.

Like I said before, and try actually reading what I'm saying:

You can sit there and be a lowly crustacean in the throes of your
embrowning, resigned to the foul poopdeck of RankerVille...

OR

You can start actually attempting to write something with skill and consideration, rather than spewing emotionally crippled, teenaged puke, and embarrassing yourself.

Who knows, maybe if you actually tried to write better, you'd be better than me.

Except that the attitude & stupidity you're emanating tends to give one the impression that, you don't posses the spine or determination to do anything well; it seems that you'd rather settle for mediocre dribble. Pity, isn't it?




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