poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer.

SupremeDreamer10 Feb 2007

Just a question concerning the verse, would any one agree that it would be better if I changed it from

"so much that I now wish to be very very dead;"
to
"so much so, that now I wish to be very very dead;" ?

Opinions everyone?