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self-suffocation (Lyric) by Phalkon

stuck inside my own head no way to break free i scream 'til my lungs implode no one listens... i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip i turn myself inside out and look at myself in the sunlight the bright burns my eyes my eyes too dry to cry i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip i tendons tear apart i feel my beating heart i can see my muscles ache i feel about to break i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip (the whispering begins... (i know it's that time again... (the light begins to fade... (and everything's still the same...) i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip

SupremeDreamer 10-Feb-07/2:33 PM
Sonny boy, I'd have no problem walking straight up to your face, appalling you with my rather foul breath, to inform you in a violent manner how much of a little shit you are. And then, if you wished to take it further, I'd decisively finish it with swift action, by brutally beating you in the face.

You can come down to San Jose if you'd like and prowl the downtown area for me, like a dunce; or you can engage me intellectually on this site by raising the bar of your sad writing abilities and use it to thrash me.

Either choice makes little difference to me kid. I don't reside in some cozy dorm, giving voice to pathetic despair like some meek child. My matress is concrete, my bedchamber open to the air, my resolve not in anyway crippled by fear. So, do me a favor, don't make stupid insinuations that you'd punk me if you had me face to face, in a banal comment online.

Such things tend to attest to your cowardice, not mine.




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