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self-suffocation (Lyric) by Phalkon

stuck inside my own head no way to break free i scream 'til my lungs implode no one listens... i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip i turn myself inside out and look at myself in the sunlight the bright burns my eyes my eyes too dry to cry i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip i tendons tear apart i feel my beating heart i can see my muscles ache i feel about to break i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip (the whispering begins... (i know it's that time again... (the light begins to fade... (and everything's still the same...) i'm screaming a tune that no one hears i'm falling apart, drowning in tears i can't hold my grip my head begins to rip

Phalkon 9-Feb-07/8:25 PM
XD

man... and to think, i haven't posted anything on here in years! i see it's still filled with the same people who think they really knoew the difference between art and trash.

i'm sorry i've ever doubted any of you. i'll go crawl under my bed while you continue to blast my musings with slams you'd probably never have the balls to say to anyone in real life :)




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