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David at the Firing (Free verse) by coldiron

Warily approach the golden boy, For in certain sunlight, he casts a dark shadow. He sits by the side of the throwing wheel--whirled droplets of clay spatter his feet. His hands, soaking wet, changing, shaping-- The pot Rising above the frenzied wheel-- Finished, To take his ashes.

coldiron 2-Feb-07/10:50 AM
this poem was inspired by the accidental death of a 20 year old potter.




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