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Journey To The Centre Of The Loom (Ode) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.

Born of oil, wrought in flame, A beast inside a wooden frame. Braced with steel, wrapped in mesh, An edifice of woven flesh. And in its looming shadow strode The men who marched the woollen road. Vats of dye, reels of thread, Cascading from its silhouette. Smoking pyres, a beating drum, Black against the blood-red sun. And through its gaping trumpets strode The men who marched the woollen road. Swollen balls, a severed hand, Dolloped from its weaving gland. Droppings here, droppings there, Basking in the brownly air. And through this wicker squalor strode The men who marched the woollen road. Branding irons, a bitter cry, An extra lash for every lie. Made to harvest, made to reap, Made to sew, then made to weep. And trapped inside this silken womb, The dead return to tend the Loom.

Ranger 31-Jan-07/6:10 AM
You are right, of course. Intellect and niceness rarely sit well together; a fact belied by my lopsided, foppish grin. I shall keep my mumblings contained within my sack next time.

By the way, on Salisbury station the other day I saw a gentleman with a face like a slightly overweight triangle and brogues which had been buffed to the point of actually generating their own light (not by his own hands, they were spotless). He was waiting for the London train with the relaxed demeanour of one who knows that it doesn't matter when he arrives at the Gentleman's Club, because there will always be a fresh plate of sandwiches and a steaming Spotted Dick in the kitchens. Was he your dad?




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