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Depature from Nam (Free verse) by AlexandraLeaving

We said sayonara to Hiroshima And hello to the green diamond rivers of Vietnam And we walked upright Where the ones before us crawled on their bellies Western snakes in the grass We were delighted by rain Finding it absolutely perfect (Once the dried blood was ignored) We sat in cafe's where the dancing girls used to come Touching the guns smilingly Their husbands silent at home Or dead, silent in the land of green

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28-Jan-07/12:01 PM
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