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Cloche. (Free verse) by howl

The subway; a cloche to beggars late evening, not one lit fire like seen in the dumps. The bell of an unattended tram peals, a boy pulling the rope to hear its reaction. The policeman points, his torch beam picking up little, he is happy. Later the beat girl hands out bread to the rattling voices of old men.

Ranger 10-Dec-06/10:28 AM
This is very good indeed. A couple too many instances of 'the' for my taste.

A subway, a tram and a policeman with a torch? Where are you?




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