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Sonnet 2 (Eulogy for a clerk) (Sonnet) by Schlinkey

"Attend, my dear old friend" I said to him; This grumbling, wistful man so stained with ink, "Your scornful view on things is far too grim; The ship you are on board is bound to sink." He raised his almond eyes and looked at me; Such vast and bitter pools of smothered sparks, "You know quite well how I detest the sea." Forever one to spout his snide remarks, He sighed at last, a deep and tortured sound, "Indeed today might be my very last; If so; should I not stand and hold my ground? The line is sadly none but mine to cast." That day he died, my friend the clerk; Upon his face, the same old smirk.

howl 27-Nov-06/2:12 AM
Like the curate's egg. I don't like 'Your scornful view on things is far too grim;'.




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